to me the font of the R right next to the lowercase r is a bit rigid which kind of stirs it away from the feeling of the other r's which are smooth but this is really nice so far
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i think it should go off the side on the right
ReplyDeletemaybe change the size of the large "r", and switch some things around a little bit.
ReplyDeleteI like the rRr in the middle and how the rest are RrR
ReplyDeletelove the R's but the center ,rRr, i don't like how the small r's arn't doing anything... but good job!
ReplyDeletegood. its like ummmm all circle-y sorta. i like how the fonts are different.
ReplyDeleteI think I would make the Rs a little more scattered and random. It might add to the craziness and spontaneity of the composition.
ReplyDeletei like how the three R's are like sort of connected. Like : rRr...its nice.
ReplyDeleteI like how the R's branch off. Maybe you should continue the R's going off the page. Good Job
ReplyDeleteI really like the variety of R's but i would seperate some of the R's instead of having them connected to each other.
ReplyDeleteto me the font of the R right next to the lowercase r is a bit rigid which kind of stirs it away from the feeling of the other r's which are smooth but this is really nice so far
ReplyDeleteIt is nice, but maybe try to make it go off the page or to one corner just so its not in the middle or have the R's go off on one corner
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