Thursday, October 29, 2009

Rachael Naphtal- portrait

21 comments:

  1. i like those pillars in the background

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  2. I wouldn't use the texture on the hair, but other than that, it looks pretty good

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  3. the pillars in the background look really awesome and distinct, nice job!

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  4. I really like the shadows on the left side of the face and the pillars in the background, the only thing I would fix is the hard edges on the bottom of the pillars.

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  5. The gradient on the face is good but could be adjusted a little bit

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  7. i like the face but add more detail to the pillars in the back and the bushes

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  8. the texture of the pillars in the background look nice

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  9. great detail on the face

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  10. maybe work a little on the eyes but the earrings and mouth are really good

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  11. The way you did your earrings is so pretty! It makes me want to go buy them! lol

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  12. The light/shadow on the face is very effective, but the background could use some more detail.

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  13. I disagree with Rajar, I think the background being less detailed makes you look more at the actual subject of the art, the person. Well done.

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