Nice attempt at a tricky pose. I'd be careful with how you choose to use textures and blur before though; the blurred areas of the head and hand look a little strange against the more grainy texture of the pants and background. Just be careful to be consistent is all.
This is an interesting image because it is an action photo. However, a little more detail in the background and also on the body would make it more lifelike.
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ReplyDeleteI looks really good but i think you could have put a little more detail in the pants.
ReplyDeleteI would make the trees seem more real but other than that i like how you captured the motion in your image.
ReplyDeletei like it but the pants seem really uniform
ReplyDeletei like the pants could have done better in back round
ReplyDeleteyou did a really nice job capturing your movement and creating the detail in the background.
ReplyDeletethose do look like great jeans, but if you add more crinkles or folds it might be more realistic
ReplyDeleteyou did a nice job on the benches in the background and the walls/windows of the school
ReplyDeleteNice attempt at a tricky pose. I'd be careful with how you choose to use textures and blur before though; the blurred areas of the head and hand look a little strange against the more grainy texture of the pants and background. Just be careful to be consistent is all.
ReplyDeletelooks too sparkle-y. I know how hard it was to do the glasses. BUT SERIOUSLY MAN WORK ON THE FACE
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting image because it is an action photo. However, a little more detail in the background and also on the body would make it more lifelike.
ReplyDeleteI like the ambition at capturing motion. The face and right hand dont look very life like.
ReplyDeleteii wish ii could jump that high. high as a kite.
ReplyDeleteLike the action, real neat.
I would put some more work into the face and add some more details on the buildings!
ReplyDeletea little more work on the face, but the background is really detailed and good.
ReplyDeletelove the texture of the pants. i would put more work on detailing the face though.
ReplyDeleteThe background is really detailed and amazing, but the face looks like it needs work
ReplyDeletelove the texture and the blurring, the pants need some depth to them imo.
ReplyDeletethe face needs more work but the texture of the jeans are pretty good. :)
ReplyDeletethe tree is amazing
ReplyDeleteThe trees and all of the different colors and shapes work really well and add a nice touch to your project.
ReplyDeletethe face could really use some more work
ReplyDeletethere is good detail in the jeans
ReplyDeletei like how the bushes/trees are made up of a lot of different colors
ReplyDeleteThe pants are my favorite part
ReplyDeleteDefinitely conveys the feeling of flying for some reason, but the shoes and grass could use some work. The leaves are very realistic.
ReplyDeleteThe face and hands look a bit too blurry for some reason... unless the photo was like that, in which case great job!
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