Nice job with the details and background. I'd be careful not to let so much white spaces show though, it looks a little strange. Just be careful the shapes line up.
Great detail attention paid to the hair and clothes of the girls. It looks very nice, but perhaps more shadows or highlights on the faces would help them stand out a bit more.
Great picture, ii think it would look more complete if you smoothed out the white cracks on parts of the picture, it makes it look as if you didn't bother to finish the picture properly. You could fix a empty space problem like this by covering the whole picture in a dark color and send that portion to the back of the work.
The one on the right looks like she's a little insane, maybe because the eyes look like kind of a crazed smile, less like a "say cheese" smile. But the background looks really good, and you obviously spent a lot of time on it.
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good job cian. its cool how you can tell who the people are.
ReplyDeleteI like the hair- it looks so realistic. Just be careful bc there are some white spaces between things where parts dont quite fit
ReplyDeletei like it, i can tell it was hard by doing two people in the photo as opposed to one
ReplyDeleteI like the picture as a whole but the white spaces take away from it
ReplyDeleteNot bad but the white spaces should be covered
ReplyDeleteit looks really realistic, i would just go back in and fix the white spaces. everything else looks really great though.
ReplyDeletelike the hair looks really realistic
ReplyDeletegreat detail on the faces, just fix up the white spots
ReplyDeletewow very good. incredible detail on the clothes
ReplyDeleteNice job with the details and background. I'd be careful not to let so much white spaces show though, it looks a little strange. Just be careful the shapes line up.
ReplyDeleteGreat detail attention paid to the hair and clothes of the girls. It looks very nice, but perhaps more shadows or highlights on the faces would help them stand out a bit more.
ReplyDeleteyeah some of the lines of the faces would help be see them more distinctly
ReplyDeleteGreat picture, ii think it would look more complete if you smoothed out the white cracks on parts of the picture, it makes it look as if you didn't bother to finish the picture properly. You could fix a empty space problem like this by covering the whole picture in a dark color and send that portion to the back of the work.
ReplyDeleteStef and Charlotte, GREAT COMBO! I like it cian
ReplyDeletethe faces look realistic, but there are some blank spaces between features
ReplyDeletereally good detail on the faces, but yea cover up the white spaces
ReplyDeleteWell done on the faces. I don't know if the white spaces were meant to be there, but if they were you might want to cover it up a little.
ReplyDeletenoice brosky. nice detail
ReplyDeletereally cool looking. just patch up the white
ReplyDeletenice job with the background, but I would try and avoid the white areas.
ReplyDeletethe background is really detailed and the hair looks realistic
ReplyDeleteI like the way all of the pieces don't fit perfectly together, it has a cool, scrapbooky feel.
ReplyDeletei would say lose the white in the spaces and your are done.
ReplyDeletethis is really good...just get rid of the blank spaces and it will add to the picture...the faces are very realistic
ReplyDeletewait what's that in the top right corner?? hahahaha
ReplyDeleteall great except for the parts where the faces didn't fit with the hair
ReplyDeleteThe one on the right looks like she's a little insane, maybe because the eyes look like kind of a crazed smile, less like a "say cheese" smile. But the background looks really good, and you obviously spent a lot of time on it.
ReplyDeleteThe foreground could pop out a little more, as said before. However, if a somewhat chaotic effect is what you're going for, it looks great.
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